Fanfiction review 2 by Alex88

Fanfiction review 2 by Alex88
Being With Friends Again
By: Pricat

This fanfiction is written on the movie shrek, it is a nice short story with a simple plot. It is showing two different scenes one in the beginning based in a human world and one afterwards in a ogre world. The interesting thing about this fanfiction is that there are many new characters other than the original characters from the shrek movies. This can have both a positive and negative effect for the story, positively it gives readers something new and fresh to read about, but at the same time this is a facfiction for shrek so the readers are most likely to miss its originality. The story could also use a bit more detail and description, to give the readers a better picture of the scenes in their heads as their reading which can let the readers appreciate the story more. Still there is sufficient amount to let the  audience know what is going on with the plot. This fanfiction is much too different to the original movie, even though the readers are expecting something new and different, they are also still expecting the foundation of it to be around the shrek movies. 

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